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Hi! I was wondering if anyone could mayhap tell me what they thought of my initial two chapters. Is there too much info thrown out there, is it too confusing, and what do you think might need better explaining. And is the writing any good? It's hard to self critique something you've worked...

Premise: Revenge focused Xianxia/Wuxia Prologue: The window was open, Sinai realized. Slowly he sensed the slight push of the afternoon wind on his loose robes. It moved between the half-mended holes in his old, heavy worn robes. Upwards it slithered. Past his torse, his face and then back...

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