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Heyo everyone, OrionVale here. I'm seeking advice and feedbacks for my first series with 6 chapter as prologue tho it felt long I want to atleast introduced the world I created properly. Any advice is welcome. About weakness, strength, something the story lacks and needs reinforcement, etc...

My post got take down maybe before I put like but here I am again OrionVale. I'm seeking advice and feedbacks for my first series with 6 chapter as prologue. “Aetheria: My New Life as a Spirit Contractor”