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  1. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    I have to close the thread door a while, something very good and personal has happened so I'll be offline for a while. Be safe
  2. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    You are not imposing at all! I have just refilled all of the coffee pots and have a little time. I'll happily take a look. :s_smile:
  3. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    My pleasure. Gloat all you need to, you earned it. As a side note why I liked the 'scar' more than the flashback. It showed the depth of the characters mind and persona. It showed that she was there because of a struggle that she'd endured. It showed that there was more in those scars than...
  4. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    @Kara_dija I've finally, finally finished your chapter 17 of Crimson Dreams. Okay. Since I know English is not your first language, I'm not going to be heavy handed on the grammar. Having said that, you are completely correct. It's a fine chapter. Given I hadn't seen anything since the...
  5. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    @Kara_dija Sorry it's taken be so long to read, but life has become a bit hectic. I see you've published 2 other chapters. I'll take a look at 17 today. What a start to a new month! Sorry about the long wait
  6. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    @harrydouthwaite We are in full swing of summer. So come on into the shop and enjoy the nice air conditioning, while I go over your book - Feelings and Fondness First, I apologize for making this review take so long. Simply put, life got in the way. After we finished our cookout last night I...
  7. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    It never rains but pours! I'll be pouring tea for the next few days. It's scorching here, over 96 degrees. So iced coffee and good old fashioned southern ice tea. Enough to make you go into sugar shock. @harrydouthwaite & @Kara_dija I'll be happy to take a look. I'm close to finishing up...
  8. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    I hope you got something out of the feedback. I'll keep a watch on your book to see how it turns out!
  9. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    @JellyFish000 Come up and have a seat at the bar. I have finally made my way through four chapters of your new book. Cultivation Starting With Treasure Gathering Bowl Alright a few things to say before I get started. First, given that English isn't your first language, I didn't really say...
  10. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    Trust me when I tell you that the difference between the synopsis and the chapters is plainly obvious. It's essentially two different people. And I suspect that the reason for the layout of the chapters is to edit each part, sentence to sentence and make it human as possible. Sadly, I'm...
  11. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    @PotatoWrites This is going to be short and not so sweet for you. I happened to read Chapter's 1, 2 & 3 - then the Synopsis of Her Gifts. It was the sheer difference in the Synopsis from the rest of the story that made me question AI use, and I found it. You have unfortunately broken Rule 2...
  12. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    My pleasure. The only thing we disagree on are ellipsis. I'll die on that sword. They have uses, don't get me wrong. It's the empty ellipsis that are uncool. Back in college, I had a professor that would have gone bananas with the 4th wall break, of course he also despised "ain't"...
  13. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    @PotatoWrites You are up! I'll be reading this story of yours soon enough!
  14. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    @Assurbanipal_II It's your turn! Let me refill the tea and get started on your 'best seller' - Schwarz -‖- Der Wille zur Macht I will start off saying that I was a tad intimidated by the sheer amount of people that you have reading it as well that you have been writing this since 2020. It's a...
  15. SurfAngel_1031

    OMG - you don't know how much I needed this pic. I am brewing up some 100% Kona right now. The...

    OMG - you don't know how much I needed this pic. I am brewing up some 100% Kona right now. The bigger the better! Again, you are profoundly adorable! Thank you for the brightening of my day.
  16. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    I'll be happy to. I have one story ahead of yours, so have some peppermint tea and relax!
  17. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    Why the hell not. The only thing i can do is get a mountain of hate mail from your readers, lol. You are adorable. I'm not super sure that 3 chapters will give me any real clarity on the contents...but why the hell not. Okay, that was me pouring honey in your tea. Let's get a look at this...
  18. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    @Assurbanipal_II Wait, wait, wait... I just looked at the book site. You have like 2500 readers for this book, 470k views, 140 chapters and you started it in May of 2023. What could I possibly tell to that you already don't know? Do you seriously want me to review this? :ROFLMAO: You already...
  19. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    Flattery will get you everywhere! Welcome to the Cafe! Tea it is. I've had this inkling for a blend. Jasmine with mango, pineapple and passion fruit. I'll blend it up... You have a seat and I'll take a look at your story. :coffee:
  20. SurfAngel_1031

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    Keep trying. Please do not give up. Sometimes it takes a little bit to adjust and before you know it you'll have 3000 readers. It's your story, tell us the tale. I have faith in you! ??
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