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  1. laccoff_mawning

    Lets play a little game about paragraphs.

    So I thought I'd take some of the discussion about paragraphing seriously and do a little test on my own work. The excerpt I'm about to present is from the chapter I'm currently working on. I'll present it to you in a few different ways, and I'd like for you to vote on which one you prefer most...
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    Least Favorite Word?

    So when writing, I've found myself growing a particular irk to the word 'necessary'. Why? I find it to be a pretty common word that I use, but I keep misspelling it. So every time I've used it, I've needed to google search it just to make sure I've spelled it correctly. I also dislike villain...
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    I'd like some second opinions.

    My newbie self decided to boot up piskel (very high tech, I know.) and create this little piece. It's now getting to the point where I think it looks like it could be a finished product. So I'd like a few more pairs of eyes to help form my opinion on what I should do before uploading it as my...
  4. laccoff_mawning

    Fast Food Types?

    So I've been thinking about fast food types for a conversation in my latest chapter. However, I don't really know much about the subject. So what types of fast food are there, that perhaps isn't often thought of as fast food, but definitely could be? Do Takeaways like Indian or Chinese cound as...
  5. laccoff_mawning

    Write your username using individual letters here

    I had a silly idea this morning, where I took my name and tried pronouning it letter by letter. So I wanted to try it with "Laccoff Mawning". So to explain how this works, laccoff mawning is spelled "L, A, C, C, O, F, F, ,M, A, W, N, I, N, G". which is "el, ay, sea, sea, oh, ef, ef, (space)...
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    Pick your bounty

    Ah, friend, you've arrived safely. I'm so glad. As you know, we at camp ORIGIN strive to resist these "isekaied" tyrants who corrupt our nation's wellbeing and morals. After much reconnaissence, we have discoved the total number of these individuals to be four, but each with their own powerful...
  7. laccoff_mawning

    Trolley problem. Just that.

    I looked around to see if this had previously been discussed on the forums. I couldn't find a thread that showed it, so I thought I'd make it. Serious answer only, although feel free to go haywire in the replies. I don't think I need to explain it, but just in case: Before you stand two train...
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    What makes an action interesting?

    What makes an action story tick? I believe all stories- or genres of stories- have something that makes them interesting. For comedies, its the gags. Simple enough. For romance (in my opinion) it's the small, lighthearted interactions between the ML and FL, although I suppose in general it's...
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