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I believe I changed it :)

Oh okay! I will change that. Thanks for the feedback <3

The story will follow Yun Yuhua, who is the female lead character. The male lead will appear later in the story because he is in Joseon. They will meet each other later on. No harem

I tried to make it short, but it means that the Female Lead and Male Lead will appear later in the story. Should I have written it better?

The beginning are full of mysteries so it will be slow and long :) I hope you enjoy. This is a historical fiction starting in Ming before the female lead starts her journey to Joseon https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1518029/the-lost-princess-descendant/

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1518029/the-lost-princess-descendant/ I’ll put mines here. My beginning chapters are slow and long. The female lead will appear later in the story :)

Thank you for your feedback <3 I am Asian :) and for the names, I tried really hard to find good names that are meaningful to the characters. I'm planning on changing my description to explain that Yun Yuhua as the main character. Thank you so much. I'm editing it currently and hoping to come...

Hmm, I see what you mean. I thought I was keeping it concise, but I was focused on setting the scene and including what felt important. I guess I may have overdone it. I will do extensive editing! Thank you so much!

Wow! What a wonderful feedback <3 There's actually more mystery that I didn't want to reveal. The conversation where "the son consoled him" isn't referring to Do-hyun. This one is a secret person I have yet to reveal :3

Oh, that's very interesting. I've never heard of that before. The story is slowly progressing to the main conflict. I'm actually trying to tell the story from my heart with the help of Grammarly lol English isn't my strongest subject. I wanted the story to be full of mystery, but I don't...

Can I get feedback on my story? I want to improve. I don't know if my description is good as well lol Anything helps <3 This is my first story https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1499154/the-lost-princess-descendant/

Here's mine! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1518029/the-lost-princess-descendant/