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Oh... well I never got that far into reading the story... It's unfortunate to hear that it took that kind of a sick turn... :blob_shock:

"nigotta hitomi no lilianne" has over 200 chapters and I think the MC is like 4 years old by the last chapter. sadly I think the author lost their motivation for continuing the story :(

My opinion of AI is this: Use it if you want but ultimately it isn't going to give you the stories you're hoping for and I likely will drop the read as soon as I notice that it's an AI generated story. AI doesn't have the heart that actual human input does. Even as a new writer, you're already...

Is it appropriate? :unsure:

I've got two versions. A tidbit to add a little bit of context to the images: The MC (The goblin) is gender-swapped into a super rare form of goblin... A Goblin Female. The specific race is a goblin variant, hence the tails you see in each image. The Aviator goggles in the second image have...

The Advent of the End Without the (LitRPG) :blob_highfive: or just "Advent of the End" would work too :blob_teehee:

That's not what I meant. I guess some better context is that I don't think you needed to announce this fact in the synopsis of your story. Some people might look at that part and be like: "so... does that mean I do or don't have to read the first ten chapters?" You want people to read all of...

:blob_blank: I read: "the first 10 chapters are prologue" ... :blob_unsure: ... :blob_shock:

I've got far too many ideas to put down all at once but I often think about those "Critical moments" when a character goes into a mode that can only be described as unexpectedly surprising or OP. One such idea I have comes when one of the characters in the MC's party falls to a villain. This...

Thanks for the follow! :blob_highfive:

I'm guessing that [removed] is a Chinese website since their contact email is a tictok address... That being said, it appears that both the stories I've posted content for here on scribblehub are on their site... The fanfic I'm not really worried about but they stopped posting Crimson Fields...

Simple: Build a sentence that can easily sub in a swear word and let your readers build upon it if they so desire: an example from my story: “If that’s the case then why did you even call this meeting?” She cursed. The above Indicates, through description, rather than blatancy that the...

Despair and desperation followed by a fleeting offer of hope that is cruelly taken away and replaced with an abrupt shift into hopelessness and fear as one is given just enough time to envision an imminent and inescapable demise unfolding before their very eyes. "Hope is a truly devastating...

Correct. Otherwise you run the risk of confusing the reader when there are more than two characters exchanging dialogue. The difficulty here though then becomes changing things up with each new paragraph to avoid having things sound redundant. Something more expressive than constantly using "he...

Generally before going into an interchange of dialogue, you first would want to establish who's speaking. Each subsequent paragraph during the exchange can then transition back and forth between the two involved people without needing to constantly remind the reader of who's speaking. Each new...

Yours is not a very long fight in terms of word count. I have one fight scene written as part of a RP oneshot I've posted on here that is a little over 6,000 words long. Like has been said previously, I think part of the problem is that you're using past tense and present tense interchangeably...