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Casey walked the pool’s stone edge. He felt its coolness on his bare feet. He then planted himself, readied his stance, drew in a deep breath from the drafty air. He exhaled, and released a frozen storm. It whistled through the fence’s pikes and into the tall grass beyond the yard. The air...

Okay so I’m a returning author. I’ve been away from writing for about 7 years. I’ve recently started a new book, and I’ll only post it after completing it. Can someone give feedback on chapter one? The Great Sphere Chapter 1 They drove through Barritarie and made their way along a rough quarry...

I've written this story on and off for months now, and I'd like know what a reader thinks of it. It hasn't gotten to the fight, as of yet, so you'll mostly be judging the writting and plot. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/33287-word-wise/chapter/90947/

The church was small and surrounded by white rocks. It was so bright out during midday, the shadows of seagulls were ink black to Fredrick's eyes, besides his own which sometimes wavered. White, thick grains of salt irritated his skin. More sweat attempted to come out of those pores, causing...

Are you liking the story so far? Would you like some new characters? Or is my grammar lacking? Place you opinion of our new world in this thread, and keep track of further releases.