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  1. hastalavista

    Good Ratings Low Readers.

    Hi As stated above. I have posted 21 chapters now. At first, I wasn't getting any readers until I changed the blurb. Now I'm getting some readers, about 24 readers, 11 plan to read, one paused, and two dropped. And I've got 11 really good ratings. But it's still very slow. Now, every two...
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    Descriptive Writing And Style.

    So I need your advice on two problems, My story had been reviewed a few days ago with a well informative review. I was told that I lacked so much in setting the scenes and visualization. Which for example was that I hadn't mentioned the use of smartphones until Ch7 so the readers had a vague...
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    Deciding on a story title

    Yo! Sorry for the Yo! Up there but you know, I find it so hard to choose a good greeting( I've only used dear sirs which was when writing emails) Anyway, I've been thinking that my story title 'Ray: The Ultimate Mage' wasn't compelling enough. So I was wondering how do you come with compelling...
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    How long are your fight scenes, and how you can make it longer?

    Hi! I was always wondering why a fight scene in an anime would be so short in a novel. I looked around the internet and knew that most authors don't describe hand to hand fight, Brandon Sanderson as well said that if you were to describe every part of a fight it will end up boring... So, what...
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    How to schedual writing time

    Hello! I wish to know how you schedual your time to write without spending hours just gazing on the screen and writing a line every ten minutes. I have the ideas on my head, I'm a fast writer as well. I used to write 6k words per day a few years ago. Now I'm attending college and have a part...
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