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@SquigglySquidSquish You're welcome! As for too many "...," I feel the same way, but for me it's more is it scattered throughout the entire page or just in one specific area? For me, it's easier to keep them contained in one section and then not have to worry about it again, otherwise, it...

You're welcome! I checked out your updated synopsis and I think it flows much better! Here are some additional suggestions to make it less wordy. Fate is nothing but a question which the Deity throws; the answer...is the choices we make..." I would delete start to since this is...

From your description, I get a sense of challenging fate, even going against destiny. Not sure what you're trying to say in the fourth paragraph since you're already talking about encountering people from the past while also mentioning from that time desperately in one sentence. Lots of in...

This is a great question! For me, I normally binge read so if a premise is interesting then I'll keep it on my list until there are more than twenty chapters or so (because I hate cliffhangers). Unless the character is really annoying and weak and there is no character growth or the book is...

Hello! I just started writing (new author on here!) with a strong female lead (and she's still growing). Also, it is a contemporary setting so just what you're looking for. It's a shameless plug but I hope you at least check out the first chapter to see if it catches your interest...

Hello! I'm a new author here...are you still open for an honest review/feedback? If so, I would love one on my page. Please and thank you! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/150208/the-shaman-queen/

Hello guys! New author here to Scribblehub and new to Scribblehub myself. I'd love to get some feedback on my first chapter and get some readers/favorites if you like what you read! First, she strayed and was murdered. Now, reincarnated, Ivey struggles to be found. She searches for a home in a...