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    Suicide in Fiction

    My story actually starts with an attempted suicide, and one thing that I wanted to make sure of was to make it clear that this is isn’t the solution, its desperation. Its an escape, not salvation. Another way to not romanticize suicide is to show the ugly side of it. The anger, the screaming...
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    If you want to roast my work I’m completely open to it! My book is called Pharmakon and the basic premise is that the protagonist is pulled between the real world and a fantasy world every time he sleeps. Heres the link...
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    What's the smallest thing that could change your entire storyline?

    If my character didn’t wear a stupid magnet his grandmother gave him the entire foundation of my story wouldn’t exist lol
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    Recommendations Post your books so I can read

    My book is a fantasy/mystery isekai story about a depressed former child actor that vacations to the other side of the world to get away from his responsibilities and trauma, only to end up being pulled into a cult consperacy that ends up messing with his soul. Now everytime he sleeps he wakes...
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    I know that my book is isekai but its as anti-isekai slop as I can make it lol. No op protag, no self inserts, no game systems, real world is super relevant and half the plot has supernatural/spiritual themes (soul abilities, dead spirits possessing objects, etc). The basic idea is that it...
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    Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here

    Yeah man just make sure you look out for yourself first
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    Username and Avatar

    I chose my username as its a bit more mature than my usual ones, but it also means something to me as it relates to me personally without being clearly related. I figured that was more appropriate for a site like this, y’know?
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    How do you write an engaging main character that makes you want to read the rest of his story?

    In my experience I find the most interesting protagonists to be the ones that are unapologetically themselves. What I mean by this is don’t try to appeal to readers or a mold that you feel you need to fit. Create a character that makes YOU excited to write. You do need to be careful to not make...
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    Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here

    Alright, well I’ve only got the first 3 chapters + a prologue right now, but I think that and the title should be enough to atleast get an understanding of what the story is about and where its headed. My story is titled Pharmakon: When I Dream I Wake Up in Another World. It is an isekai, but i...
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