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Its definitely better than a 9k chapter for on a site like SH

can you not spit it in 3 or 4 parts without making it less interesting? if the answer is no; people probably wont read the entire chapter anyways

scariest thing i ever seen in my life

A chapter should take as long as it needs for it to tell everything you want it to tell

Hey thanks for this, i appreciate you giving my work a chance. It’s quite obvious my writing is inspired by the many JPLN’d i’ve read, i know. But I’m working on it, and do honestly believe that I’m getting better chapter by chapter, i thought the one line sentences worked as a way to manage the...

Oopsie, edited my original post :)

If you’re into isekai stories, I’d appreciate if you gave mine a chance. Im open to any feedback really Book/Series Title: This Wonderful World We Woke Up In! Genre: Isekai adventure comedy Link: This Wonderful World We Woke Up In! Type of Feedback Requested: any type of critique is welcome...

"isnt that bad" ? DARK SOULS TWO IS PEAK

I use ChatGPT, yes. But for writing. I wonder how that’s all you got out of my message ?

I like to think I’m not that against AI compared to most other creatives. Hell, I’ve been subscribed to ChatGPT for almost a year now. What I don’t get is, why would anyone use AI to write stories for them? It can’t just be because they think it’s easy money, right? Because there are much easier...

I reviewed your’s already y’know ?

share some of that insanity, will ya?

i actually went from a long synopsis to a short one because even my own attention span wasn't long enough for it :blob_dizzy:

that's actually pretty smart, thank you! yeah im actually reading her story, lol. always liked her synopsis a lot, damn talented fox...

Ahh, the part I, and many other authors struggle with most. Now that I’m finally posting a story again, I keep looking at my synopsis over and over and over again, thinking “this isn’t doing it for me,” so I tried making a new one, but honestly I find it really hard to make a good and...

Keep it up, put your story in my reading list so I'm looking forward for the future of it ;) Oops :blob_dizzy: The first chapter was pretty engaging, and you did a good job immediately setting the tone of the story. Even though i get what you were trying to do here, reading it kinda...

I liked the opening with the fly landing on her eye a lot, but after that the protagonist started feeling kinda unrealistic to me. If I woke up buried underground by my abusive dad, I’d be panicking way more. She never really does that and just stays calm, thinking logically, which pulled me...

well, I'm really excited about the future of your story!

yup, and you offered great advice. My comment was half a joke, and half reminding people not to overthink comedy too much :)

I'm a firm believer that if you consistently write something good, viewership will follow. Usually around the 20-chapter mark. Unless you write smut. Free views.