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Hello! I've already been on these forums to get some feedback on what I could improve for my story. Your reviews were very helpful so I'm trying to get some more after applying what I learned. You can be really harsh if you want to...

Synopsis: Society is rarely built with equality in mind. After the first recorded instance of an awakening the 1st of April 1925, and the subsequent attacks of monsters, the world began adapting itself to try and conform to this new status quo. Saint, rank, lair, liberator... A whole new...

It started as a vent story to get some steam off, and a self-imposed challenge for no more than 2K words per chapter. If you can stomach the themes, I'd like to get feedback on the prologue I wrote. (4 chapters, 1K each apart from the 2nd which is 1,9K) You can be as brutal as possible. I...

Hello! Well, the question is pretty self-explanatory. I had some feedbacks regarding my chapter length being too long so I'm currently trying to trim down the chapter by splitting into parts and cutting a lot of fat from it. Hence, my question. What do you think a chapter's length should be to...

Heyo. Everything is in the title. I need feedback for a specific story I wrote which is more or less Solo Leveling but the ensemble cast is stuck at a shitty rank. You can get me to read your stuff in return, or just the roast the shit out of the fic. I'm down for whatever. Here's a brief...