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(If anyone's stumbling into this thread after now: I've finished the rewrite in the meantime. It ended up being not that extensive, but it should make everything a little more immersive, I hope. If you think the problems L1aei pointed out are still too present, please make some concrete...

Thank you! You've actually identified exactly the things I was worried about, and I think your perspective will help me fix them at least a little. 1. the Characters: To be honest, even while writing I felt like I was neglecting them. I rationalised it away; the story's from Natalie's...

inb4 the feedback request list reaches the length of the Gilgamesh Epic - this - Still Waters (GL) - is my story, genuinely sorry that it's fanfiction, I hate myself too, thanks.

May I suggest the humble Hussite warflail? It's like beating people with a stick, but the stick is cool. Or like beating them with nunchucks, but without beating yourself in the face at the same time.

Thank you, this does soothe my panicked heart a bit. Viewership seems relatively consistent, with slight drops between release days (which hopefully means those readers just haven't checked for newly released chapters yet - it's only the third day so far). And thank you as well, I completely...

Hello, first time poster here, both on this forum and of a story in general... My main motivation to actually release something I'm writing to the public for the very first time was to get some feedback, but even though I got a surprising amount of readers already, none of them has left any...