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My fragile ego is absolutely about to shatter, but I might as well try to take this as an opportunity to improve. Eidolon Codex

For me it depends, I would like to say a good plot and the right characters are all it takes, but I have genre preferences, too. I like a bit of everything in something, to be honest. Romantic tension between at least a few characters, really helps. It can still be good if you have really strong...

I'm currently winning by drinking meat.

After finishing the entire thing, I can say the story improves as you read further into it. Some subtle foreshadowing with the auditor might make it hit harder, I had the idea of who she really was from the start, but if you had added a hint of foreshadowing to her, like her face being obscured...

So... did you just make this thread to Showoff your artwork?

Yeah, pretty much. I don't see a problem with using it as an editing tool, the real problem is when they just give AI a prompt, and let it write the story.

Fools... my Magikarp uses... struggle.

I am currently winning with the true god of Pokémon.

Space distortion -> they raid their own underwear drawers.

Well, it's your story, so you can take creative liberties and give them some variations and stuff, never limit yourself to just the facts. But to give a brief rundown, they kept track of the date in older times, were responsible for handling spiritual issues, and were famous for their shikigami...

This fight, which consists of I, Worthy39, and you, Tempokai, has more likely than not come to an end. I am standing on, and have gained a significant advantage while jumping onto this ground on which I stand. It is of a higher altitude than the ground which you are currently standing on...

All of those sound like good things. I always love getting feedback, even when it's a bit negative, so I guess there's no harm in throwing mine out there. I'm still new to writing, so if you do end up picking my story, I hope you can find at least some positives, but I'm sure you'll find a fair...

I usually wrote third person omniscient, but when I wrote chapters with two specific characters in it together, I usually went third person limited, because the protagonist never actually learned this guy's name, and I used it as a way to show that. I refer to the guy by name in several...

This one's a solid read if you like the LitRPG genre The Bug Player Who Survived This one was a well written fantasy, not many chapters yet, but it's pretty promising Luna: The moonlit vanguard And what type of selfish person would I be if I didn't self promote? Eidolon Codex

Okay, fine. Have a raccoon meme. You get some dirty looks around here when you do anything not trash panda related...

Alright, I may be signing my own death warrant, but I had to know what the result of anything that wasn't a raccoon meme would be met with. And why not make it a meme of the natural enemy of the raccoon? Like I always say, if you're gonna do something stupid, do something REALLY stupid.

Ethereal

Yes, usually I do, though sometimes I exaggerate the details. I wrote a shapeshifting character with an ability that essentially gives him regeneration and a technique that's highly self destructive, based on real biological functions... mostly. I exaggerated his regenerating and shapeshifting...