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Wow indeed!

You can reach out to the company who owns Pocket FM directly, they have an easy to find email address. At least, as far as determining if it's real.

To whom it may concern. I left on my journey many, many minutes ago, and I write you this letter in... mediocre health. I have traveled far from the docks after departing from the boat, a whole mile. And I have found no grass, nor seeds, only weird floating diamond things. I have sent you this...

I'm currently winning by overcoming my writer's block after four long months.

Then begone, suspicious merchant! I have a boat to catch!

Does that next town have grass equivalent to the Swiss Alps? If so, I will escort you, and complete my quest! Two birds, one stone!

Sir yes sir! I will bring home all the grass, and then we can grow it here! Just give me ten to twelve business weeks to find it.

I think it's a fantasy world, so I dunno if the Swiss Alps even exist here, but I will most certainly go off on a solo adventure to find it, sir or madam!

Then what comes next? Do we switch over to a cultivation story, or is there something stronger than the demon lord? Also, do monsters that look and taste like cows, that are actually not cows, count as bovine meat?

Ooh, can I be the idiot sidekick?

Wait, why are you asking for an opinion? Is it not a normal thing to do? Huh... you learn something new every day.

That it's difficult to do while stressed, which I have been all year.

Based on the name of the thread, I imagine you'll just repeat that you've come for feedback until you get an overwhelmingly positive review.

Yes. I could make a fortune letting other people into my house to see mysterious creatures that live in my hallway, and it would pay for itself.

That's a tough one, especially since I'm a big fan of environmental storytelling. But in terms of story, I'm going to give it to the original Xenoblade. I feel like the characters were actually a bit better in the third one, but for me, the plot twist in the original is what sells it for me...

This is so gross. That guys hand is bent the wrong way to shake the other guy's!

If you just want to get as many readers as possible who think your work is average, but still enjoyable, go the route where you just jump straight into the action. If you want fewer readers who think your isekai is a masterpiece, go for your own ideas.