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  1. RepresentingPride

    child position

    In my story I made a twin brother who are younger by a few minutes.
  2. RepresentingPride

    child position

    it depend the age to be honest. Generaly you have sibling rivalry under 20 but pass it, you can die for your sibling. I really find this strange that in most story the sibling are not really represented or forgotten, and if they appear it's all time a younger sister who got aggressed often.
  3. RepresentingPride

    child position

    Youngest of eight child.
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    How to remove a bad review from a hater.

    Don't say that. My readers still think that my story is good vibe. (for now)
  5. RepresentingPride

    How to remove a bad review from a hater.

    I really need to read the lore of this forum one day.
  6. RepresentingPride

    How to remove a bad review from a hater.

    I don't know since it's a princess, maybe he prefer she. :blob_teary:
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    How to remove a bad review from a hater.

    I think it depend period. There some who state at the beginning that they will fulffil the feedbac when they have time. It may took time for them to reach the end of the feedback thread.
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    How to remove a bad review from a hater.

    You almost burn my eyes with this much light.
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    How to remove a bad review from a hater.

    There a lot of feedback thread here if you want a real review. If you think the guys who rated your story is a hater, ask @SailusGebel to give you feedback, you will probably have a worst rating by this princess since he/she strict. But he/she just rate it in the the thread, don't fear it and...
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    How to remove a bad review from a hater.

    I just check after seeing this and I don't know what was his/her intention at the begining with the author note but that definetly worked good for he/she since the story got 30 5 star easily.
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    How to remove a bad review from a hater.

    The guys literally said at the end of the review that he will change it if he see your story improve as he continue to read it. It seem like a true review for me and it's not like he the only one who rate your story 1 star. The only other review you have are not a review, just a 5 star saying...
  12. RepresentingPride

    Need a name

    I have poor sense of naming but here some idea, maybe you will find a word interesting and can mix it with other : Biogenic Arcana Organomancy Essence Alteration Essence Somatic Resonance Metabiokinesis Genesis Animacraft Life Force Sculpture Genesis Morphotheurgy Somatic Aetherweald Fusion...
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    How to deal with perfectionism?

    In one of my previous job, I used to be like this. To get rid of it I thought of how much time I waste to make thing perfect compared to what my colleague make good. If it's some time, it's good but too much perfectionism are borthersome, you can get lock to a tiny detail for month.... You can...
  14. RepresentingPride

    Your opinion on round brackets(parenthesis) in original stories?

    Never used them. I don't even know where to put this except in author note.
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    Recommendations Stories where Reincarnated/Isekai’d MC uses outside knowledge

    The Author Pov Tales of demons and gods The thief who roamed the world The Legendary Mechanic Omniscient Reader Viewpoint The second coming of gluttony Soul land 1
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    Does protagonist of a combat story need to be the best at everything?

    They popular at the beginning and become forgotten when they reach the chapter 50. The only one who stayed like that was solo leveling and it's just because it get carried by the art.
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    Recommendations Old people

    :blob_hmm_two: okay
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    Recommendations Old people

    I read it years ago and liked it, but stopped due to not having enough chapters at that time. The rating don't help every time, try it and see by yourself if it suit your taste or not.
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    Recommendations Old people

    Everyone is Young Except for Me, It's a vrmmorpg story where a grandfather got asked by his grandchild to play vrmmorpg with them.
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    Does protagonist of a combat story need to be the best at everything?

    Don't know which old manga you're talking about. And for reincarnated, isekai, time reverse, and dungeon, these story tend to be fast paced and the mc have to do everything alone so yes he become Jack the god of all trade. But if you look at the best sell, none are the best at everything.
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