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    Action Feedback (I don't know how to write it)

    Hello, so I am currently making a story called Urban Valor, and I need help with how to write Action. I would like to say I am proficient at imagery and emotions, but I don't have a clue for the combat scenes, my brain teh and the words just don't match at all. I am reaching out to ask for...
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    I just posted my first series!

    Hi everyone, it's a pleasure to meet you. I'm a newbie author, and I'm announcing my first series! its called Urban Valor and currently has 2 chapters and a 3rd on the way, I hope you give it a read! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2249744/urban-valor/ I would love to hear your thoughts on...
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    I would like feedback on my first series (plus 2 chapters)

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2249744/urban-valor/ This is the link to my series that I am writing. I have currently published chapters 1 and 2. The front cover is being drawn, and I have hired an artist. I am looking for feedback from you, the authors, on any major mistakes I may be...
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    1st Chapter feedback request

    This is the first chapter of my series, I would like criticism on how major errors I might have made, and your opinion on how well it is built. ( https://coda.grammarly.com/d/Urban-Valor-Chapter-1-rough-draft_ddhpLyQTrFu PDF file here as well ) PLEASE READ Haven't used scribble hub format, so...
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    Would you read this story?

    I made the first chapter of my story and want to know what you readers think of it. It is currently in production, but I want to share the introduction to see if it would hook you guys. I am open to constructivite criticsm. Chap[ter 1] "Let The Show Begin" [Light City] Sitting on the East...
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    Chapter 1 introduction

    Finished my introduction. This is only the intro, I need to write the combat tomorrow, never done it, so wish me luck. want to get your thoughts on it. (PS NOT heavily edited yet) [Chapter 1] "Let The Show Begin" [Light City] Sitting on the East Coast, the ultimate destination for Business...
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    Crazy mom lore

    I was talking with my mother this evening about my story I’m writing and wanting to create a villain title and she told me to use the “Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde” I never knew she had knowledge like this, she hates horror and everything I have no clue how she came to know this. And...
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    1st chapter bullet points

    Making the first chapter and made bullet points to start from there, and lead into the full text want to get opinions on how it looks so far. Introduction He starts in a dream climbing a hill to see.. something he is chasing someone who calls his name and tries to encourage him, he is...
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    1st chapter bullet points

    Making the first chapter and made bullet points to start from there, and lead into the full text want to get opinions on how it looks so far. Introduction He starts in a dream climbing a hill to see.. something he is chasing someone who calls his name and tries to encourage him, he is...
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    3rd story has been chosen!

    Hi I am an avid reader of scribble-hub and want to write a story I have 3 in mind with stage 1 progression in all of them or general outline so to say but don’t know which one to start and was hoping to get some help on what would be more interesting to you guys? Story 1 sword and magic No...
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