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The imouto paradise family tree is just a giant block going straight down, no deviations.

"So...Yeah. I'm sorry."

I just stumbled upon the weirdest YouTube rabbit hole of videos just talking about how inbred certain families were. Did you know there was an actual mathematical way to tell you how inbred someone is? I didn't till yesterday.

Well, if you would like to know, the answer of whether Yes or No would change and apply differently according to the events of past, present, and potential future that would shift in course depending on the answer. I can extend it by an extra line or two if I think really hard.

I picked 2 and 4. I wanted to pick 3 also, but was only limited to two choices, so I just picked the ones that literally killed the person involved in the scenario.

Depends on the situation.

I see what you mean about the chair thing. I'll make improvements to that and be more precise. Thanks for the feedback.

I'm talking about if the way I'm describing the scenery and characters is good enough to have a detailed movie play out in their mind of whats being described. That and plus if the way I'm structuring my sentences and word choice is any good. Most of this stuff I can usually pick out in editing...

I don't think I'm the best at describing things, particularly places and people, so I want to see if its just me being hyper critical of myself or not. Can y'all tell me if this is good or not, and if not then what should I improve on? Hell, even if you like it still tell me what I should...

Do the second option. Not only is it better paced that way, but also that gives some mystery to your MC. I'm sorry, but I have to disagree with this for a whole bunch of reasons. If it weren't for exposition it would make reading stories infinitely harder. Imagine reading any fantasy story...

It can vary depending on what I'm going for. If I want to get in-depth at what it is I'm talking about, I'll do it in as lengthy of a paragraph as I need. Rarely do I have a word salad, but if the topic that I'm discussing needs the length that a word salad provides, I'll write it with as much...

Why do cats like computers so much? I swear, my cat rubs on my laptop screen like as if its is the one feeding him everyday.

My magic system is very complicated. Essentially, my MC can use Life Magic, which essentially means controlling plants and the like, but can also range to healing, buffs, and debuffs. Basically its a very support focused type of magic. However, the strongest of Life Magic users can essentially...

The strongest character in my story is the Goddess of the Universe. I mean, she created the universe and can destroy it all in a single snap. As for whose the strongest when push comes to shove? That's a tricky question. It'd either be my MC or the main antagonist. My MC has the power to read...

This is unironically a really good premise for a horror story.

My characters, especially my MC, would see this as evil. He'd question how in the world is there so little orphanages in the world that the only other option is being groomed as a kid to do sex work. He'd also try and right the wrong the world created. As for the Mushoku Tensei MC, Rudeus is...

Truly diabolical:

You will never see my first draft. I mean that literally. The first draft to my main story was written on a notebook that I wrote when I was 12 and have lost. So you're never seeing it, and thank god for that. If you want an idea of how bad it was though, I wrote in a scene where the MC's love...

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