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I have only ever gotten into two 'sports' stories. Both were VNs, and for the first, the focus wasn't on basketball but on everything else going on around the MC as he tried to bring his university team from last place to the state championship. The other was about a couple who were into...

Favorite: Verbose Least Favorite: though Underutilized: Awesome (in it's true meaning) Over utilized: but, or Awesome (in how we utilize it these days) I am sorry, your grandma's secret recipes might be good, but they are not awesome. The crest of the waves towered over the ship's bridge...

The letter 'd' is just the letter 'a' but hard, and now you can't unsee it.

Oh, you don't need to critique MFGR anymore unless you just want to read it for your own enjoyment. Honestly, I will rewrite Arc 1 at some point, as I am completely unhappy with how it turned out. I had made too many mistakes and was reaching too far to fill those plot holes. I liked how Arc 2...

Ooo I am in the poll this time! I'm voting for myself just for that, though I suspect the real father is YOU quackers... though those two anon guys are a bit shifty as well...

The best? When @MFontana went through several chapters of one of my works, and did full-on breakdowns on them. He provided extensive feedback on that piece, helping me develop my skills in both writing and world-building. If he ever offers to critique your work, I suggest you take him up on...

glad I wasn't the only one... For OP, not really. Outside of the indigenous natives' folklore of Glooscap and his brother Malsumis's battles, I can't think of any ghost/monster stories from here that were not manufactured in recent times to entertain tourists.

This is DEN. His system only adds small amounts of stats when he changes the lore of the worlds he travels to, or spends points he earns in the Gatcha... which he also has to spend those points to fix his old and broken body. He does get to keep the skills he earns in his travels, but he had to...

I learned that the other DM in my D&D group regrets not letting my Chronomage use Chronosurge's version of Silvery Barbs and instead allowed me to use a version of Action Surge as a replacement. First round, Two Spells, Twelve dead. Scrambling ensues. Spawned 3 invisible enemies, which...

A man traumatized by a war ends up being reincarnated in to another world and has to deal with his traumas while dealing with the typical isekai bullshit academy life. Discovers that several of his friends who died had also reincarnated and were stuck in the same situation.

explains why there is a PayPal link already, just looking for a few bucks with a side hustle. Probably didn't get a donation yet, so is trying to drum up some publicity.

You should quit. I hear McDonald's is hiring. Or maybe be a Wal-Mart greeter. Or, if you are not a troll, Keep writing, and don't seek validation from us when your work has only been posted for a couple of days. If you wanted an author to just look over your work, all you needed to do was ask...

Yeah, this was my fault. Em-'s are apparently more of a thing with humans... that said, it looks bloody weird seeing them used so much by AI. I will admit that I am wrong here though.

naw I believe you, I actually think I recall a few now in the Mistborn series.

Which books? I swear I own most of his works, and I don't recall seeing those... wait, maybe, but it wasn't prolific like AI likes to use them. It was to highlight key points.