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Weird video, but I love the song...

Well, how about we start with some questions? Because I do not know what you want. What do you want to do with your short story? Where do you want to lead it? What will it be about? What kind of plot do you want? What genres will it be? If you are asking for someone to create a plot for you, I...

I dislike sudden point of view shifts within the same chapter. Makes me get lost, so I prefer it when it happens in the next chapter. As long as it makes sense. For my view shifts, I conclude with the MC losing awareness/consciousness, and instead of doing it, the same chapter that one ends, and...

Okay, your first chapter doesn't sit well with me. Not only is it incredibly short, (I think told you that before) but I feel like I missed this? Please never put suicide and have a better life afterward. Remember, suicide is the end product of a massive depression. It isn't because, fuck this...

Psychopathy is a neuropsychiatric disorder marked by deficient emotional responses, lack of empathy, and poor behavioral controls, commonly resulting in persistent antisocial deviance and criminal behavior. (This is an actual psychology definition on the matter.) Most psychopaths will cause...

Everyone is the hero of their story. Even the villains. To them, they are in the right and the world is the one at wrong. c: Op... To make the perfect psychopath requires you to detach emotions from the characters. Psychopaths can't feel sympathy for others. They can't connect with others...

Putting out one of my favorite songs~

Hm... God artifacts, made from the souls of fallen gods, that may look like a piece of normal jewelry to staffs and daggers, are the strongest weapons in my story. :blob_melt:

:blob_popcorn: Sitting here with one finished novel slowly being uploaded and 30 chapters of the third installment. I guess you are new here?:blob_uwu: Just wait until your release time. c: Allows you more breathing room to learn and other stuff. Or do the Patreon route.

Blob has a glory of info to give! c: Well, I tried but failed. But Blob has saved us! All glory!

Uh... Uh... Metal scrunchie... Uh, Headband? No...:sweating_profusely: I would just call it a metal band around their hair. Throw a few descriptions to define the color and what it's made of. Then call it a day. :blob_melt: Otherwise, I do not know how that is named either. Does it even have a...

Well, lol xD at least he didn't splatter on the wall. xP He lives to fight another wall another day!