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  1. Jocelyn_Uasal

    I'm a much better poet than prose writer, writing a book is so hard ?

    I'm a much better poet than prose writer, writing a book is so hard ?
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    I just posted what I'm pretty sure is my best poem ever because I think the magazine that...

    I just posted what I'm pretty sure is my best poem ever because I think the magazine that published it went out of business lol RIP to them ig ?
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    Fresh Poetry Thread

    This is probably my best poem ever. It was first published in Transcend Literary Magazine which I'm pretty sure is now defunct, so I'm unsure what to do with it. Her Heart Never Stopped Sitting at the funeral of my ex who never died. Bouquets of black roses, then red, then black. Your mother...
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    I think about R.R. Martin saying "How the fk do you write so fast??" at least once a day

    I think about R.R. Martin saying "How the fk do you write so fast??" at least once a day
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    How to do a time skip good?

    I'm currently knee deep in editing right now and posting on the forums to ignore my work ? Sorry love, can't add much more to my plate
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    How to do a time skip good?

    I think you've just got to have enough distance between the jump, going like a week or even a month ahead might just look like lazy writing from a readers perspective. I'm a big fan of absolute tone shifts from one to the other too, like a character crying over something really dramatic then...
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    What In Your Opinion Is Good Action?

    It just has to be earned in some way, movies can do quick and cheap action because the visuals of it are cool but in a book the reader will always be asking themselves, But like, why? So I guess the stakes, or at least a compelling reason
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    What are your thoughts on the Egghead arc of One Piece?

    It was pretty good, wish they just told Bonny's backstory all at once instead of jumping back and forth a thousand times but that's One Piece I guess. Was also cool to see the 5 elders go crazy even if they are all certified losers.
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    What advantages do novels have over other mediums?

    I don't think comics and movies always do detailed imagery better? Things like taste, smell, the coldness of the air outside or the dampness of the air, I would say that novels do all of this better in my opinion. Sure I can see on screen that its raining, but the internal dialogue of how it...
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    Fresh Poetry Thread

    Oooh this is great, hard to find good contemporary A,A,B,B poems, or really many with rhyme at all ?
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    searching for good audiobooks

    Oh in that case! I'd download Libby and add a library card! Each library has different stuff so it's hard to recommend some from my catalog, but it is absolutely the best way to get free, quality audiobooks.
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    searching for good audiobooks

    Do you mean audiobooks in general, or specifically ones on audible? Audible has this book for free in The Bad Guys series called Scamps and Scoundrels. You might like that. Or He Who Fights With Monsters but that ones kinda pricy
  13. Jocelyn_Uasal

    I-Phone VS Samsung

    Love how the thread immediately, with no hesitation, went from God I hate hearing about this shit please stop to Nuh Uh MY phone is better! in like two seconds
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    Well one is a verb but not a verb but act like a noun but can be an adjective and if you use it...

    Well one is a verb but not a verb but act like a noun but can be an adjective and if you use it in a phrase complimenting a subject it becomes..... wait.. sorry uh... yeah my brain started melting
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    One day I'll intrinsically know the difference between participles, gerunds and infinitive...

    One day I'll intrinsically know the difference between participles, gerunds and infinitive... one day
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    I removed the title of my book in favor of its subtitle But, Why Kill The Wolf? and I think it...

    I removed the title of my book in favor of its subtitle But, Why Kill The Wolf? and I think it works better. Razor Child just doesn't seem to fit
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    What evidence is needed to conclude one way and not the other

    The fact that it was a noble house is alone enough for me to conclude that it wasn't a mass suicide. A noble house of such a large size is usually more than willing to throw their family under the bus to save their own lives, and the only reason that such a large family would commit suicide...
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    Gameplay and Immersion

    Morrowind is one of my favorite games ever so gameplay is hardly ever something I'm looking for, the story and immersion is always what keeps me invested. Though, seeing a women has never broken my immersion lol They've literally always been in war, even if it meant sneaking in
  19. Jocelyn_Uasal

    Looking for Artist (Resolved) In need of chapter illustrations!

    It's really good and pretty close but I think I'm looking for more towards realism. Thanks for responding!
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    I was at work when this happened lol Can't escape but also can't do my job because I had to...

    I was at work when this happened lol Can't escape but also can't do my job because I had to stand and listen
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