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CHAPTER 1-HEARTBURN Ahhh. Ahhh, it hurts! X clenched his chest and cried internally in agony. He was somewhat used to it by now, despite the pain. Especially after the encounter with the demon yesterday. And the wound on his body. The red light dimmed and brightened alternatively, almost...

01010111 01101000 01100001 01110100 00100000 01110100 01101000 01100101 00100000 01100110 01110101 01100011 01101011 The human was safe. He was thrown out of the vehicle as soon as it collided with the tree. He would probably be hanging on one of its branches by now. But the AI couldn't tell...

I haven't published it yet. Have written a lot of chaps(130 as of rn), but I think that it'll be better to post it all after I'm done writing and editing. If I post the first few chapters thru text(or if there's a way to link word files. Notepad doesn't allow italics when I copy paste.) will u...

I got that. I think the way I said it was wrong. I understood it was a tactical battle, but for me(personal opinion), for such a powerful fight, the injuries were mild. That's all.

The fight itself was excellent. I don't know if this is proper advice or just some stupid thing only I am doing, but the damage seems lacking. When Clara wins the battle, Erna's injuries aren't mentioned at all. The other thing bothering me is the repetition of the word "woman". It is used more...

Ic. Thanks man. I'll do from next time. Have a nice day.

I have a novel I'm still writing. Haven't gotten to publishing it yet, but I do have a stock of chapters. If I send them here, could I participate in this? I totally understand if ur not willing to read it like this. Hopefully its worth ur time. Have a nice day.

Hey Tempokai, remember me?(of course not, this is an alt acc). I was one of the first novels u checked(and prolly the one that was roasted the most. It's still here, on page 1.) Remember telling smth about being stuck in a forest of mid and having to either continue that or burn everything down...