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  1. Syringe

    22 readers, 707 views... 0 reviews and 1 rating (my own)?

    Very, very normal. At best you could ask/remind readers to, but other than that, don't expect people to go out of their way to review/rate unless they really like it (or hate it). It's honestly the same over at Royal Road aside from review swapping.
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    Should Rights have Rights ?

    Why should they if they don't have anything left?
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    Skill steal question

    Find a thermophile and take its heat resistant abilities so I can survive this coming summer.
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    More myth

    Some myths I don't think I've ever seen depicted or mentioned are Australian Aboriginal mythology. There's a deity called the Rainbow Serpent responsible for all creation, and this creation phase was known as the Dreamtime/The Dreaming. It's a deity deeply connected with water, and is said to...
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    Writing How do you guys tell your readers your characters' power level?

    Stats, and actually depicting/showcasing/writing how badly they can mess stuff up.
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    Finding the Right Balance of litRPG Elements

    So long as its fun then that's all that matters. I feel that lighted litRPG elements pair very well with fantasy. Arifureta did it in a pretty good way where it's only relevant in Guild Cards, which shows how strong someone is at a single glance. It's also a good idea to use these elements to...
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    Your moral Alignment

    Are you asking because of the Baldurs Gate 3 release?
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    I need help

    It looks much better. But your 3rd chapter is broken/has the same weird structure.
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    I need help

    People dropping stories is completely normal, but if you see it that fast it's probably due to grammar/readability more than anything else from my experience. Your first two chapters have weird spacing, almost like it's structured as a poem (looks fine on mobile, but on PC its a bit jarring)...
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    What are your characters' flaws?

    Main Character (Frost - Nexus): Emotionally driven and morally attached in an otherwise morally bankrupt world. Not a flaw in of itself, but in the context of the world, it has caused the MC major reconsideration of what they believe is truly right or wrong, and threatens to break them. Main...
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    How to properly describe a beautiful character?

    To convey beauty, you're going to want to have people in the background reinforce/support this. Telling us she's pretty is one thing, but we can't understand it until we see how the world reacts to her beauty.
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    Hey does anybody know how to change the name of your series ?

    I might be wrong, but if you're already sent it/saved it, then I'm pretty sure you can only edit the title after it's approved. Editing the synopsis/tags should be ok though.
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    How much would you invest in Envy stonks?

    I won't disclose how much I've invested, but I hope it's enough to have me on the Board.
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    The portrayal of slimes in fantasy novels

    Slimes that are sapient and not just wild animals/monsters. Hardly seen them outside of slime girls (not sure if they count) and that isekai slime one (not sure if this counts either since they were originally human).
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    Giant Spider Question

    Unless the child walks on their hands, then I'm sure it'll go for the head 9/10 times. Whichever's closest to the mouth is naturally going to be eaten first.
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    Writing Prompt Envy's Poem Thread

    In the darkness of the night, she roams with glee A vampire girl with a love for poetry! In a moonlit library, she's often found With a stack of poems, she'll astound. Her eyes aglow, like stars in the sky With each verse she reads, she can't help but sigh. For her laughter is contagious, like...
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    Hey authors, how much do you think of character designs. (Maybe should've could've put it in artist forum but ehhhhhhhhh)

    I don't think there's a wrong way to approach character design, but I think having at least ONE defining appearance trait will go a long way as it'll help distinguish them from other characters, even if they from the same race/background/etc.
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    The ridiculous

    Baki. People down 10 litres of water, has someone scientifically explain what it does, all the while someone's muscles start steaming as they repair as if they're a Titian from AoT. Relevant Clip:
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    Spicy

    Thai levels of spice.
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