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  • McPhoenixDavid
    I think it is not nice to post the same thing on multiple sections of the forum.

    It looks like spamming. I don't mind but others might. Anyways, about that work: I have one thing to say:

    PARAGRAPH SPACING!!!

    Anyways, welcome to SH!
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    BrokenShuriken
    Thanks a lot.

    I am sorry. I was new to scribble hub and went overboard. I will not be doing it again😅.

    Also I just fixed the spacing issue. If you are willing to give it one more try I'D be very happy.

    If in case you read it please give me a honest review on how it felt.
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    Can you guys please check out my novel '7 Entities' and tell me what you feel about it. You can be honest and say "it's trash" if its bad i don't mind.
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    TheNonexistentOne
    I just scrolled through all the chaps... And yes... You need to do the paragraph spacing right. You only edited two or three chapters maybe.

    It's so unreadable that I didn't even bother trying to read.

    Work on that first. Then promote your story once again.

    Also... Work on the title. Add number to all of them. Like you did with first few chaps.
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    BrokenShuriken
    Thanks a lott for the advice. I was new to scribble hub(It's my mistake I didn't preview the chapters). I just copy pasted them. I just fixed them and numbered the chapters.

    If you are willing to, please give it one more try. You can openly rate it 1star if you find any inconsistencies or mistakes. Once again thank you.

    Also about the title I am sorry but I can't kinda change it because of the story itself.
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