Chapter 6 has been completely rewritten! Cropped almost 600 words out of it, and streamlined the dialogue a lot. Now it should read much better! I'll leave the link below if you wish to take a look!
Chapter 3 of my novel Nowhere to Run is completely revamped, reworked, and rewritten! Hopefully, now it reads a lot better and won't get shredded in the reviews as badly as before!
I'll leave the link below if you wish to take a look!

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