Looking around the R18 syosetu and then back at english porn novel sites, I can see a big gap in between the cultures.
Made worse when I wrote in JP style minus the sfx and got readers feedback with "ehh, I don't like this bit, can you change it?"
Made worse when I wrote in JP style minus the sfx and got readers feedback with "ehh, I don't like this bit, can you change it?"

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