AI says nothing while elongating the prose. That is definitionally purple.
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ElijahRyne
‘Eleanor ate a fish happily.’ Becomes ‘With evident relish, Eleanor savored every flaky bite of the perfectly grilled fish.’ Or ‘Eleanor savored every buttery flake of the sea bass, a contented smile spreading across her face.’ Deepseek & Gemini
ElijahRyne
Or, ‘With a look of pure glee, Eleanor made quick work of the pan-seared salmon, her fork clicking rhythmically against the china.’ Or, ‘Eleanor gleefully devoured the trout.’ Or, ‘Eleanor purred with delight as she crunched through the silver mackerel.’ Gemini.
ElijahRyne
A simple passing sentence becomes an extravagant showcase. Every sentence becomes a slog. In short don’t use LLM’s to enhance your writing. If you must use it let it make its suggestions and then decide for yourself what is best.
Tsuru
Feels like a KR manhwa writer.
Where even the most random villain can pull off the lightning-eye.
Where even the most random villain can pull off the lightning-eye.
ElijahRyne
Or every moment is so melodramatic that no moment stands out.
Tsuru
^No wonder they(kr) stopped caring about the moving(dramatic/sad/wholesome) moments.
If you consider every moment as melodramatic, why should you care about the true ones of the source material ?
> Hence they destroy them by adding half a chapter under it. Or insert a shitty MCU-like joke to destroy it by trying to be snarky. Or add a cliffhanger (like a shadowy villain appearance).
If you consider every moment as melodramatic, why should you care about the true ones of the source material ?
> Hence they destroy them by adding half a chapter under it. Or insert a shitty MCU-like joke to destroy it by trying to be snarky. Or add a cliffhanger (like a shadowy villain appearance).
ElijahRyne
It is why I stopped reading Manhwa. Every story felt the same, where a kid is bullied for being poor. Where the good guys are perfect and the bad guys ugly. Where you can tell what is going to happen in the next few scenes before you read it. Just boring, imo. I read a bunch when I was 17 or so and found Webtoon, but grew out of them fairly quick.
Tsuru
If i counted the number of times, a KR manhwa moodbroke their moving moment (something worth crying over, or something worth putting a smile on your face, bc its a very important scene, and a culmination of an arc/chap)
i would probably already arrived at double digits (10+) and its annoyingly a lot for what shouldnt exist. (a bad decision)
i would probably already arrived at double digits (10+) and its annoyingly a lot for what shouldnt exist. (a bad decision)
Tsuru
Each time i see a manhwa cover, its 99% a edgy story about fighting, revenge, time travel, etc.
Fuck. The reason YUREKA was famous globally (i think) (i had the series in paper form where i live but no other kr series) was that it was "original" (mmo + strongest from beginning like OPM)
Same.
Each time i see a manhwa cover, its 99% a edgy story about fighting, revenge, time travel, etc.
Fuck. The reason YUREKA was famous globally (i think) (i had the series in paper form where i live but no other kr series) was that it was "original" (mmo + strongest from beginning like OPM)