Alright. Read it. Is there anything you would like for me to touch on in response? Including tone; if you're not interested in where I see improvements could be made, I won't mention them.
If it wasn't, I wouldn't have read the whole thing.
So, one of the major things I want to point out... how should I say this? We know this is all happening on the ground, but I don't feel grounded. Does that make sense?