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Hm. Different, unless I'm so ignorant of winnies, I can't tell. She's just massivelky OP, right? Or she progressed to be massively OP. The daughter POV was different. You overload on the saccharine sweetness, just sweet-bombing. So when the grit arrives, it seems like more. No numbers, but you now and again select a spell. Is it properly called a system?

What age demographic is this aimed at, You *could* go more gore, I know you *can*, but you hold back. Less is more. I like her indifference. She's a sociopath. But without the twirling moustache. Used for good, not evil. Is she a proper anti-hero? She's not noir. She's not Byroonic, no brooding. Edgy Smurfette. I like the rose motif, the blood reading motif. Out of place against the sack of sugar.

I'm struck by how diff our MC's are, yet they share many characteristics though they go about them in vastly diff ways. We both worship the inner code, the morality. I see her as a Sigma, again just like my MC. Am I juvenile because I like to sit squarely in POV without compelling reason.

I'm struck by how neither of us would read much less write the other's genre or style... but they share so much. The manifestations and executions are 180 degrees opposite. Different is an understatement, as a description of your text. I'm iognorant of winnies, but I've never once seen anything quite like it.

is it deliberate that its a sexless demographic. By that I mean I can see a 10 year old girl *or* a ten year old boy reading, and cringing at the mild gore of the blood rose beast dining on her enemies, as she OP effortlesly calls up her spell. Is it a morality lesson intended for children. Cant put my finger on it, so out of my ballpark. But I like different for its own sake.

and some armchair pop psych. because why the hell not. Are you maybe a sigma, and its a self insert fantasy to enforce the inner code. Again the damn similarity. My MC has his inner code, and will die before going against it.

thank you. I feel as if I can make you happy, I'll really have something., But my style and execution would make you barf. Even though our goals in some basic way share similarities.

thanks for indulging me. It was fun.
(silly voice)
Tina sleepy now, eldoria. Tina go nye-nye. *wink* hehe
next time *you* pick a chapter you want me to see, because... reasons. you are after all, a sigma so i can;t fathom your true purposes with what you choose to show me.
good night dear.

Thank you. Good night.