Some solutions to consider include using cinematic action narratives for fast pacing without sacrificing emotion or detail. Breaking the narrative into sub-chapters makes each scene more intimate. Using a selectively showing narrative, emphasizing dramatic scenes. As authors, we should know when to show it and when to tell it.
Well, I've seen you provide a lot of feedback. That's great because it not only helps fellow authors, but it also helps us better identify writing errors and can consciously help us improve our narrative writing techniques.
Breaking the narrative into sub-chapters makes each scene more intimate.
Using a selectively showing narrative, emphasizing dramatic scenes.
As authors, we should know when to show it and when to tell it.