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This is a isekai right? So why would you consider adding a Dodge ball chapter as your first one? There's no hook, not any I see it, and it might be just me. Your synopsis is fine. That's all it about it. You're cover is hand drawn I think you done it well but I'm going to be honest it isn't the best thing in the world

I'll take a look at the dodge ball chapter, but I like having something normal happen before Truck-kun strikes and will most likely keep it. I wish authors would take the chance to open with a 'slice-of-life' perspective every once and a while.