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SirContro
SirContro
When you have a mimicker, the progression happens by getting more abilities or better abilities from more/stronger foes.
SirContro
SirContro
You should also put a limit as to how many powers should be stored at a time.
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
Yeah, I wanted that.

But I also am making up rules for him to lose powers like expiring coupons
RepresentingWrath
RepresentingWrath
The most basic ass progression is for how long you can copy the power.
SirContro
SirContro
You should give him a literal lobotomy so he forgets most of them.
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
The power copying is its own a major issue.

I had set it like, oh god I hate myself, like the SH authors who wrote fanfics. By having MC slowly growing into the power
SirContro
SirContro
Elaborate, Nuffian.
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
@SirContro correct, that is the plan.

But I chickened out and gave the guy a new power with each lobotomy.
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
For example, mc gets superpower.

It is not like he suddenly-

*wait a bit RL STRUCK*
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
*back*

Eg. When he gains Luke Cage's superpower aka super skin and strength that comes with it, MC can only use a small portion at first as his body is slowly adapting to it the more he has the power ON.

He can swap to other superpowers by switching Luke's power OFF, but due to his body has adapted, it still has a small amount within.

Meaning he can still use trace amounts of powers even when not equipping.
SirContro
SirContro
Oh that's so gay.
SirContro
SirContro
Just make it one at a time.
SirContro
SirContro
No adapting period.
RepresentingWrath
RepresentingWrath
Make it so he can copy powers for a short period of time in the beginning.
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
He can then keep using Luke's power until he has fully assimilated

Which over here is a problem.

Because now there is no need to keep Luke's power ON. He just need to have the damned thing on storage.

The grow part comes when MC can sacrifice Luke's power for other superpowers, but that will mean that he also has to lose all the assimilation he has.
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
In my pursue for power, I forgot to give limits and weakness
SirContro
SirContro
So you've basically made your MC a weakling during this new assimilation period once the power is sacrificed.
SirContro
SirContro
That's a weakness. Good job. The power isn't as broken as I thought.
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
I need it to be more weak.

Like I said earlier, he can have trace amounts of superpowers within him even when not equipped.

So I made him into something like a mini frankenstein with the 15 bloody characters from all over fiction.

Granted, they are all weakasses like "good at throwing ninja stars" and "run well", I still feel that I need somemore weaknesses.
SirContro
SirContro
Definitely.
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