Also, I think the author oversteered because the last work is harem and sex all the way to the bloody end. This current one has no oyster to slurp on.
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NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
at least both works share the same issue of abrupt end lol
Valmond
How bad could the start be? ?
NotaNuffian
Structurally it is bad.
Also I think the author and MC forgot about the MC mother.
Also I think the author and MC forgot about the MC mother.
Valmond
Pretty sure that is just common in most stories. Or was that for the father? 
NotaNuffian
Nah.
The mother was his main motivation for the first 200 chapters with him taking care of her.
Then somewhere somehow, after sending the mother elsewhere, we no longer acknowledge her existence.
The mother was his main motivation for the first 200 chapters with him taking care of her.
Then somewhere somehow, after sending the mother elsewhere, we no longer acknowledge her existence.
Valmond
And that answers that.
The thing is, a lot of these problems come from a lack of proper structure.
You see these cracks widen the longer a story is.
It takes a certain dedication to write a long story and maintaining its flow and weight.
I will say from experience, doing about 600 parts or so. The amount of information is extremely difficult to manage.
The thing is, a lot of these problems come from a lack of proper structure.
You see these cracks widen the longer a story is.
It takes a certain dedication to write a long story and maintaining its flow and weight.
I will say from experience, doing about 600 parts or so. The amount of information is extremely difficult to manage.
Valmond
It took a lot to keep things in line, while introducing fresh, and better ideas without losing the core.
One way I had done this, was when I knew things couldn’t continue without losing quality.
I came up with Book 5, 6, 7 as standalones while also extensions of the main story.
One way I had done this, was when I knew things couldn’t continue without losing quality.
I came up with Book 5, 6, 7 as standalones while also extensions of the main story.
Valmond
Book 8, specifically was more for a break book with interesting ideas and concepts with its own small end.
Book 9 as the conclusion. For that last book, it went full into its core one last time.
Character stories that link the core, six antagonist story parts that covers them, and further connects things.
Book 9 as the conclusion. For that last book, it went full into its core one last time.
Character stories that link the core, six antagonist story parts that covers them, and further connects things.
Valmond
One break story, which also shows something subtle but important. Then an incredibly strong finale to finish.
With Part 7.5, 7.6, 7.7, 7.8 specifically covering the protagonists from Book 5, 6, 7, concluding their story.
Which links into the end point. Part 8, 9, conclusion. This entire thing showed once more heart of the series before it concluded.
With Part 7.5, 7.6, 7.7, 7.8 specifically covering the protagonists from Book 5, 6, 7, concluding their story.
Which links into the end point. Part 8, 9, conclusion. This entire thing showed once more heart of the series before it concluded.
Valmond
What I am saying is, the longer a story. The harder it is to keep the same quality going. Many fall off after the 100 point.
To clarify, 7.5, was Book 5. 7.6, Book 6, 7.7, Book 7, 7.8 Book 7. The protagonist from Book 7 had it insanely rough.
But these are things I had to consider.
To clarify, 7.5, was Book 5. 7.6, Book 6, 7.7, Book 7, 7.8 Book 7. The protagonist from Book 7 had it insanely rough.
But these are things I had to consider.