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NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
As time went on however, dude got stronger undead and ended up keeping his mother in storage up until now.

When she was thrown out, her undead body bit the hardest at MC, as though trying to buy more time but was immediately smashed to bits.

The son who had lived for eons had long forgotten about her. But when she was destroyed, he cried.

And then he soon followed her footstep
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
And then the MC sort of ruined the mood with a snark and I got forced to recall that the world the work is in is grimdark cultivation.
RepresentingWrath
RepresentingWrath
It's not grimdark cultivation world, it's retarded cultivation world.
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
To each I guess.
RepresentingWrath
RepresentingWrath
I mean, author ruined the whole point of grimdark with retarded snark. It's like writing a dramatic tragedy novel, but every peson who dies miraculously gets back to life.
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
Yeah.

A part of me was feeling shit at MC throwing shit at the guy.

But if my memories were correct, the necro dude had been pestering MC for so bloody long and even though minor, there's bad blood between the two.

Iirc is the standard "when MC was weak and got neardeath bullied by the guy and comeuppance."
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
If I must add, it is more like two chickens trying to peck each other to death in a chicken-eat-chicken world where life is cheap (cuz China, seriously) and everyone's gotta be phoenix head instead of chicken butt.

Because being butt = sodomy, and not the fun kind.
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
Or maybe it is my age where I get sentimental again.
RepresentingWrath
RepresentingWrath
Yeah, no. When MC is the usual Chinese MC nothing will work as intended.
NotaNuffian
NotaNuffian
Should've just stopped at the part where MC crushed the guy and not spit.
RepresentingWrath
RepresentingWrath
It's like you go to the cinema to watch some super dramatic movie, I don't know, Hachi. During the most dramatic part of the movie you hear a thunderous fart, reverberating across the whole room. Kinda pulls you out of the movie.
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