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Tsuru
Tsuru
MC sang a impromptu song for her&fans in stadium(not concert, he used stadium for movie filming/shaolin soccer).
And not sure if recalling correctly, but she fainted or something soon afterwards.

And bam author put the note and drop series.
Now ? I legit think the author was trolling.
Tsuru
Tsuru
THEN
There is this TimeTravel series where MC is accompanied by GirlsFrontline Girls.

Putting aside the fact that mc doesnt act like a cool commander(but lazy otakuish) and causing the girls to be sus of him
At ch20+, mc was on a killing revolt for the people (i mean, HE GOT GUNS)
But then mc is like : hey lets stop in city and try to make life better for this city. DESPITE WORLD BURNING EVERYWHERE.
Tsuru
Tsuru
Anyone with a small expertise in reading/writing, can totally see the author is trying to milk it as this idea was never done despite so obvious good idea.
Bc mc legit could send 1. Not 2 or 3. But just 1. Girl. To assassinate the Emperor. And the nobles in capital.
And have the series be finished in 10chaps more.


Its fine. Its understandable.
Tsuru
Tsuru
But then author pull paragraph long explanations. POV switches.
Pointless "tactical" planning when legit could gun-o them all. (not infinite ammo but mc farmed pts to summon a ton)

But its not that the problem.

What is facepalming.
Beside the fact mc is lazying in his scifi base. AND ignoring that probably millions are dying of famine/revolt/etc
Is that he write a mongol throw a baby on a rock.
Tsuru
Tsuru
Prologue is badass (despite horrible mc)
Middle is mid (still bad mc)

But then there is this random chapter that show "invaders" and a baby killed in front of mother (with a blood splash description). And herself being pulled back into the house by her leg (by a mongol to rape her) while screaming (likely due to loss of her child / she escaped to beg to not kill it)

Wth kind of left field ball is THAT !?
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