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MC : I was bullied in palace when i became court-wizard. Bc im commoner. So i tried hard at my job so i get more popular. But backfired as i was more hated. (naive thinking)
Oh and btw, my job was killing and PURGING people. No details btw. (author trying to portray him as some badass john wick or what? like some cold robot killer? but then is bullied bc he is talented newcomer/commoner????)

MC : My sole reason i kept going at my work is a good friend (wont betray). But during drunk moment he said he killed some epic dragon (not sure if its manga artist fault for bad explain)
Then the guards, a duke (shouldnt be here), appeared. something about "animal protection"
ITS A TRAP !
So i will threaten the dude to not arrest my friend ! Im so kool ! (and bc im very op mage)

MC : Here is my story oh why i was fired, childhood friend. Im so sadddd. Also i fear you fear me bc im think killing is normal.

Girl : Down worry ! I dont dislike you ! (very very pure eyes that seems straight of shoujo manga)
MC : Oh ty !!! I feel better !

Im legit dumbfounded about the author. If he is trying to portray this MC as epic, or very naive and dumb(like other betrayed MCs).
Or if its the manga artist that suck at pace/explanations.
Or drawing in wrong style (MC have ikemen looks with cold no emotions face, which now i think about it after saying it, is VERY very VERY bad idea)

There is such a thing as having multiple personalities to multiple people.

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I am.
Im kinda bipolar.


Or im cold, tsun
Or im dere dere.
Or im madoka. Or im homura.
Or im gigi. Or im cici.

So to return back to OriginalPost (Nota)

The author : have no planA or a planB
I have no clue what the f he is trying to do with the MC.

Pretty sure the manga try to surf the "betrayed" trend

but
Im unsure if its novel sucks.
Or if artist fault for mixing the recipe = A emotionless mc when he should have emotions. Or lack of explanation pannels, etc.


Oh. Another detail i again found out while writing=side characters are pointlessly too handsome/ikemen. Im doubting the artist is shoujo artist.
I mean who would draw so well a bearded dude!

I think the artist is trying to sell themselves to other authors as well.

I mean, just look at all those bleached underpants, once an artstyle is liked, most likely other authors would want them to draw on their behalf.

Legit not kidding.

Putting asi....Well not putting aside.
The beginning is utterly cringe overly done trope of "Im a teacher to the worse class"
MC enter classroom, manga try to portray him as some kind of high EQ/IQ, know the tropes to not be angry, etc
Looks cool

But then there are jokes on him by students
and naive actions of him, that destroy his image.

OR HE IS COOL OR HE IS NOT (comedy) NOT BOTH !

(Analogy)


Its like someone try to a copycat of JohnWick movies (bc its successful)

The copycat movie, do a emotionless killer with dead wife.
Ok fine. Everyone knows he is copycat but bear it.
But then movie try a "comical" unserious recruitment session like Deadpool2(bc its successful too), where it tries to be funny. Despite MC should as cool as JohnWick.
Now that is dumb.

(rereading my posts)

Oh and when MC threatened the "noble" trying to arrest his friend.
MC was like : charging a magic spell in his palm, like IRONMAN pose energy beam

and btw readers know the dude can cast LVL7 spells or something (apocalyptical lvl? nation destruction lvl? bc lvl4 already can break a invincible anti magic wall)


Like, why are you fired if you are basically the strongest ?

Thing is.
EVEN THE SHITTY "expulsed from parties" series, AT LEAST give a barely-decent explanation to why MC dont knows he is op or the fact no one knows MC is op.


Here ?
Its like the manga try to gloss over the topic ALL TOGETHER.
Its like common sense he is op. Its common sense that a dude with giga rare LVL9 spells can be fired bc of confronting a noble.
Its common sense to put him in charge of worse class.

At this point, most future authors just copy without understanding why.

Very sad

Like.

-The party leader steal achievement.
-mc is lowkey
-mc spells are buffs only
-mc is defense only
-mc is backstage support
-prince fire the very competent mc
-jealous guy fire mc
-mc work is underestimated
etc etc

But here ? Oh people bully MC bc he is commoner. (cringe bullying of food cantina, also wtf ? a cantina in palace?)
And MC is fired bc he threatened a noble. Despite giga strongest. And n°1 employee.

At this point, most future authors just copy without understanding why.

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*blink blink*
...?

You totally nailed the crux of the problem. ? So cool nota. For real.?
Damn.

(and its sad edit: THAT THEY CANT EVEN COPY SLOP)

Nota, are you competing with @Corty, who has the realest memes?

Wtf.

Typo !
typo !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I mean : The problem is sad ! (not you nota!!!!)

most future authors just copy without understanding why.

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That they copy slop, but CANT EVEN copy slop. And do worse than slop.

@Tsuruya the wtf was not for you.