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It is unfinished btw.

The opening has a bit of discordant sound, not sure if that's intentional. The beststuff is in the middle. Some of it is rough. But overall I like where you're going with it.

The clashing/dissonance is intentional.

I sort of thought that might be the case.

A thought experiment: Write three versions. One without the dissonance, one as it is now, and one leaning heavily into the dissonance.

Are the transitions between ideas quite rough for anyone else?

@RepresentingGluttony too much work, writing it I already messed with having certain measures dissonant and others consonant. Also one of the least dissonant pieces I have written. Doesn’t hold a handle to the musical representation of a type of my migraines.

Well, it is really good as is, you'll get flak for the style though.