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Lmaooooo. I'm on mobile rn, so I'll read it later, but you can also add generic metaphors?

Try to be more respectful avoiding words that could sound judgmental and be more inclusive or gender-neutral.

"We need to provide more help for poor families."
"We need to provide more help for low-income families."

“Each businessman should bring his own laptop.”
“Each businessperson should bring their own laptop.”

And no slang!

Write Cassie using talk no jutsu on her enemies, and they all become best friends and establish world peace. She never fires her gun and the people she was fighting against let her leave with a McDonalds gift card.

@StoneInky I thought you don't read Sci-fi?

Is it Sci-fi? Urgh... I'll at least try the first chapter and see what I can do.

The story is actually about someone from sci-fi setting isekaid to fantasy setting!

Synopsis is awesome. In chapter one, the exposition at the start was a tad draggy. Later we got tons of action, and I liked that. The atmosphere of the battleground changing as the guy appears was abrupt. And I am curious if this is the new world or the isekai'ed setting right now?

That is all. Very nicely written. Sadly I have no RoyalRoad account.

@StoneInky you don't want to have RoyalRoad account. @beast_regards can tell you everything wrong with that site.

I was banned for antisemitism.

@StoneInky Thank you! I wasn't expecting you to say something so nice. Everyone else say it's terrible XD

The isekai start in the middle of the fight with the guy. There was an explosion and now we have to worry about magic instead of science.

@Macha Please don't elaborate! This thread will get nuked!

But there is this one person saying it's terrible in a good way. I will be proving him wrong by making the future chapters terrible terrible!

@Zorn my sister in Hell, the people saying your story is terrible are parts of the cartel manipulating trending. They see you as a threat and want you to stop writing.

Ohhh. That explains it. The whole structure of the novel is actually very good, the issues are not glaring, so I was wondering that.

It's actually very good enough to get a placement in rising star. That itself is a big achievement. Some people are just salty it can get there without ads.

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