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typical holier than thou, reality warping, overpowered fool

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The protagonist fancies herself a philosopher and thinks herself a brilliant tactician. She is neither, and displays this to a painful degree.

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As interesting as insane characters can be, they are difficult to write.
Unfortunately, Asami isn't an in interesting insane protagonist, she is a Xianxia young master.
She was pointlessly arrogant before she became powerful and remains so after she does become skilled. There is no noticeable character growth, negative or positive in any meaningful way.

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As interesting as insane characters can be, they are difficult to write.
Unfortunately, Asami isn't an in interesting insane protagonist, she is a Xianxia young master.
She was pointlessly arrogant before she became powerful and remains so after she does become skilled. There is no noticeable character growth, negative or positive in any meaningful way.

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Throughout the series, Asami looks down on those around her, dismissing them as idiots. She has a narrow viewpoint and enjoys monologuing about how right she is. While not uncommon in novels, it is annoying.
The more serious issue is that her idiot field and plot armor often conspire to make her correct when she shouldn't be

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The issue with tactics is similar. Those around her sometimes have decent ideas in spite of the idiot field. 90% of the time she dismisses them and posits her own, usually inferior, plan. Everyone rejects her plan. The other plan, which was almost always better than her own plan, will fail spectacularly.

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Often, when she doesn't get her way she will force it, sometimes even killing people to move things along. She doesn't listen to orders, acts on her own, bad mouths her superiors and is never punished for it in any meaningful way.

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