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Hoshino
Hoshino
Though physically weak, he excels in anything that requires strategy, intelligence, or skill, mastering games, anime, manga, and light novels. But beneath his exceptional achievements lies a deep desire: he wants to escape his mundane life and be transported to another world.
Hoshino
Hoshino
His obsession with being isekai’d has pushed him to extreme lengths. Natsumi has tried every cliché from his favorite stories: jumping in front of a truck (only to survive unscathed), writing endless complaints on forums, and praying to the heavens for a chance at adventure. Yet, nothing works. He remains trapped in his ordinary life.
Hoshino
Hoshino
Desperate for a new challenge, Natsumi takes on Vetaback, an infamously difficult game that no one has ever beaten. Months of frustration and sleepless nights pass before he finally achieves the impossible—he beats the game. The screen prompts him to type a wish. Without hesitation, he writes: “Please isekai me.”
Hoshino
Hoshino
But to his disappointment, nothing happens. Weeks pass, and life continues as dull as ever. He begins to accept that his wish was a futile dream.





Then, two weeks later, everything changes. Time stops, freezing the world in place. Natsumi stands amidst the silence, the only one unaffected. In that surreal moment, he realizes his long-awaited escape might finally be within reach.
Nolff
Nolff
That's it?

And I don't get to see what he's about to see after getting isekai'd in the synopsis?

I'd read your novel, tho I'd prolly get a bit distracted on the way because you cut my interest when it was rising.
Nolff
Nolff
That's what I get from reading the synopsis. I can't exactly pinpoint the problems nor give obscure details, but to me, it's alright. And a decent story will always be a nice read in my eyes.

Keep it going.
Hoshino
Hoshino
@Nolff its not a synopsis, its a rough summary of the first chapter.
Nolff
Nolff
Oh...

Well, that's why it felt unfinished.
Anyway, mention me once you got 20 chaps of it going.
Nolff
Nolff
Okay?
Hoshino
Hoshino
@Nolff That's like two volumes...
Each chapter is 4—5k words with each volume having 356 pages.
Its on chapter per weak, so wait three months.
The novel is called HanaSuki btw.
I'm not gona post the link since for some reason me posting links will have to get it a moderator approval.
Nolff
Nolff
Oh well, good.

On what web?
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