Both of you are correct = What they said, and your choice. There is no true "wrong" in this. Bc both are totally logical and true.
But its still possible to make it better : like the saying say about "utilizing your strength and dodge your weakness" or somthg.
Just try to get better at your skill at writing like a LN. Or look at how east do their nowdays LNs (even chinese LNs now exist and look like JP)
But its still possible to make it better : like the saying say about "utilizing your strength and dodge your weakness" or somthg.
Just try to get better at your skill at writing like a LN. Or look at how east do their nowdays LNs (even chinese LNs now exist and look like JP)