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50-50

Meh seen it done plenty of times with variations here and there in creepypastas.

@SailusGebel Bro, it’s not even 50-50. It was really annoying how she was trying to act mysterious and failing at doing so.

Give me full coverage of the story. What's going on?

A man from a detective agency comes to a typical village for some investigation purpose and he eats at a restaurant with an unfamiliar name. The food was really good, so people often come here. But, the owner of the restaurant was kinda mysterious. He was actually investigating her.

Then, some mysteries unfold and he finds out some weird things about her. She was actually a surgeon at a relatively famous hospital and she quit for no reason at all.
And, he found out about some(5) people who came to that restaurant and vanished from there.

So, he assumed she was an organ trafficker. She invites him to her palace knowing he knew somethings about her. Then, he went there. She brought him an old album where there were some old photos of her. And, at that time when she was telling him her story, he was drugged.

She then told him that she was a survivor of the Andes plane crash and she survived there eating the deads' flesh. Then, she told him that she also ate 5 of her customers. And, fed them to her other customers. And, he was then almost senseless. She then put fire on the palace and fled from there as there were police forces out her house.

That's the end of the book. There's a sequel but I'm not intending to read that.

Yeah, I can see why, the plot isn't creative and there are lots of plotholes.

Uh! The plotholes might be my fault as I'm not really good at explaining. But, yeah, the plot WAS shitty