Your title and synopsis give me no reason to read. Neither of them convey the idea of the story to me.
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RepresentingWrath
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Tsuru
O_o
Dang, for the kind Envy to be THAT direct, i am not even a ounce curious about it.
Dang, for the kind Envy to be THAT direct, i am not even a ounce curious about it.
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I am not kind. ?
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Tsuru
But seriously have a big question.
Not Boss2005 but "new authors" in general.
What kind of life or books did they read, to keep doing 2000ish title/summary, when clearly JP WN is in vogue and/or Chinese and KR. The kind that poof or directly spoil the whole story in title or bait reader.
Not Boss2005 but "new authors" in general.
What kind of life or books did they read, to keep doing 2000ish title/summary, when clearly JP WN is in vogue and/or Chinese and KR. The kind that poof or directly spoil the whole story in title or bait reader.
Tsuru
i see now what you mean
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i see now what you mean
RepresentingWrath
Apart from synopsis and title that Envy pointed out you have a so-so cover. I'm not saying you should put a hot anime chic on your cover, but current one looks rather bland. You've probably fumbled up the very beginning. Did you post chapter 1 and 2 back to back? Like in the span of a couple minutes? Lastly your upload schedule is so-so.