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"No matter how strong you feel or how clever you think you are, you ain't doing shit against what's out there. It's not for you. You aren't a part of that world," My father's words echoed through my mind, as a bloody sword struck the ground, inches from my face.

I concealed myself inside the forest brush just in time. Had the stars been out that night, I would be dead. All around me, everything went silent. I held my breath for the longest minute of my life.

scary

I wonder if it is a good enough start or if I should workshop it some more.

Well, if you are wanting to write a weak to strong story, otherwise no.