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it's a good 1k words that sets up everything nicely but it feels so short....

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that doesn't help, monke

Add random descriptions to your characters, their surroundings and/or feelings. Or sex. One of the two gotta work.

yeah, I probably gotta describe the surroundings more...
most are implied, but the readers can't read my mind

I would let it eat for a day and read it the next day with fresh eyes. You might spot out abrupt transitions and lacking description where it is due

Do like me, just don't give a fuck and end the chapter when you feel like ending it.

@tiaf I'm actually doing that, I wrote it yesterday :T