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It's a pleasure to see you.

Read my novel. I want your feedback.

I've sporadically read a few chapters of your Naruto fanfic, especially the latest ones. I liked the flowing style and was thinking of giving it a thorough read sooner or later.

Which one would you like me to read?

I would prefer the Schwarz one. I would like to know what you think about my MC and her personality, especially with the background of your intelligence thread. I think there is more to her than meets the eyes.

Also flowing style?

Care elaborate?

I wouldn't dare say that we write in a similar way, as you are clearly more skilled than I am, but I recognize myself in the use of short and raw sentences, with minimal embellishments, which sometimes leads to a violent flow of deeper thoughts. It reads well, isn't heavy, and I can say that I like it.

Someone with feather light writing ... Admittedly, my sentences tend to grow heavy from time to time.

I've added your novel to my reading list. I'll give you a more in-depth opinion, especially since we are "rivals" in the secretive protagonist tag.

Oh, yes, I like being secretive ... But admittedly, it less secretive than just not being talkative ...

Gave you a 5 star as 4.3 is unfairly low, imo ...

At least, on scribble ... considering what all is running around with higher ratings.