Link your story. I want to evaluate your style and form a judgement. 
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D4isuke
It's right in my signature
Assurbanipal_II
Veni, vidi, legi. I have consulted your story and understand now what the reviewer was talking about. Is English your first language?
weakwithwords
1st or 2nd is immaterial. Some bilinguals are better at using their so-called 2nd language due to frequency of usage. D4isuke probably has never ever tried writing a story using his 1st language. He is not proficient enough, but he is better at writing than some or even most monolingual native speakers of english.
Assurbanipal_II
Is it not. Your premise is baseless as useless as you argue by possibility and not by probability. The way D uses certain phrasing and expressions is ... unconventional.
weakwithwords
We're agreed that he sucks. He's also kinda emo which complicates.
// how to solve myself for this.
... how to solve this for myself.
My point is I've met worse. I've gone and met different kinds whenever vacationing in the us. They talk well, fluent and all that, but when the same people write ... atrocious.
My 1st post asserted that time is needed, time he doesn't seem to want to invest.
// how to solve myself for this.
... how to solve this for myself.
My point is I've met worse. I've gone and met different kinds whenever vacationing in the us. They talk well, fluent and all that, but when the same people write ... atrocious.
My 1st post asserted that time is needed, time he doesn't seem to want to invest.
You can improve your grammar by studying which can take days, weeks, months, or years. Others can help you edit (making it better or worse), but only you can change your style. You can improve your story by refining your style which can take days, weeks, months, or years.
Don't do the crime if you can't do the time.