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TheMonotonePuppet
TheMonotonePuppet
Dang.

Am I that bad?
Assurbanipal_II
Assurbanipal_II
Oh, no, my bad. Had my settings on line spacing on RR. XD
Assurbanipal_II
Assurbanipal_II
:blob_melt: Your writing is unpolished, but I feel the spirit. :blob_aww: It has a certain charm how you paint.
TsumiHokiro
TsumiHokiro
Just how exactly are you used to reading... 5 line spacing between paragraphs?!
Assurbanipal_II
Assurbanipal_II
:blob_neutral: Those who fear the void, fear also the blank page.
TheMonotonePuppet
TheMonotonePuppet
Thank you!!! It's so awesome to know you are reading the story!!! This is The Red Marionette, right? It definitely could use some polishing . Going back through it after you mentioned it, I definitively see a good many mistakes of mine.
Assurbanipal_II
Assurbanipal_II
Silence in literature can be present as a theme in a novel (e.g. Pirandello's I quaderni di Serafino Gubbio operatore) or as a presence, as an entity in itself subsisting and eloquent in a work (perhaps theatrical, such as Beckett's Waiting for Godot), but here we will deal with silence as the absence of words
Assurbanipal_II
Assurbanipal_II
within the art form that makes use of words themselves to convey its message, as well as empty space on the blank page
(because, as Futurism teaches us, after all, literature remains linked to sight and is also able to communicate through forms and
arrangements, it is on a sheet of paper and this does not have to be a marginal detail for communicative purposes).
Assurbanipal_II
Assurbanipal_II
:blob_uwu: A poet should never fear the blank page or the scarcity of words. They are a sharp blade.
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