Thank you!!! It's so awesome to know you are reading the story!!! This is The Red Marionette, right? It definitely could use some polishing . Going back through it after you mentioned it, I definitively see a good many mistakes of mine.
Silence in literature can be present as a theme in a novel (e.g. Pirandello's I quaderni di Serafino Gubbio operatore) or as a presence, as an entity in itself subsisting and eloquent in a work (perhaps theatrical, such as Beckett's Waiting for Godot), but here we will deal with silence as the absence of words
within the art form that makes use of words themselves to convey its message, as well as empty space on the blank page
(because, as Futurism teaches us, after all, literature remains linked to sight and is also able to communicate through forms and
arrangements, it is on a sheet of paper and this does not have to be a marginal detail for communicative purposes).
Am I that bad?