Imagine absolute ego manic and sociopath like Homelander, but the twist is that despite being a brutal murderer they actually love and care for innocents.
Rule #993 - We are all capable of equal amounts of sin, some of us choose to just be more carnally indulgent or listen to the goodness and morality in our soul.
I recently discovered the wonders that are Disney adults.
By far one of the biggest cesspools I have ever seen; there is a difference between passionately admiring a product and the artistic value behind it and mindlessly assaulting those that don't find your form of entertainment good.
Stumbling through these juxtapositions,
paradoxes, vampric vixens;
brought to heights above this plane,
while shattered hopes drive us insane.
At least we play and joke and laugh,
poetries in motion on others' behalf.
Send two for Floyd, my wonder's spent,
but thanks oh giants for your shoulder's lent.
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Your poem was a TKO to my own; it was better.
It knocked me out, like the heat in this May weather.
Paradoxically, I was fortunate to receive the hit.
It gave me the inspiration to write my own shit.
Thank you for leaving it in my glovebox.
Your poetry skills are admirable T.K._Paradox.
I try to ignore off-topic replies in my serious thread, and I don't reply to them, so as to not derail the thread. So allow me to reply to you here. My previous feedback thread is 20 or so pages long. I'm used to people not reading the rules. Though, to be fair, this time I'm dissapointed. I didn't check the tags before reading the story, a rookie mistake.


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