Two patients in the hospital who have chinese chess as common hobby.
One has family that has to work and can't visit often, the other basically abandoned and terminally ill How can you think there is something indecent going on???
@tiaf Ma'am, maybe I am having early dementia again, but the sentence "Caring about his well-being was his son's and... canred for his well-being," is fudged. Very fudged.
@SailusGebel Not really helping when Elia is a gender neutral name. I'm lost.
@tiaf Some two cents from me (oh lard), either delete the sentence and not write anything or try and turn it into something else? Like having flashbacks (ok no, flashbacks suck in written works) or surprise buttse- cameo?